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Kiss Scene Judging


Kiss Scene, a Flipside contest!


Hosted by [Mister Saint]


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Mushy stuff ahoy! Yes, this contest is about writing your best kiss scene! Don't let the title fool you, though... it's not all roses and romance.


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Theme


A kiss can convey many things. Gratitude, love, friendship, passion, good wishes, sympathy, sometimes even hatred and anger.


A kiss scene is also a tough one to pull off believably. Now, our goal in this contest is to write a kiss scene, but remember... it doesn't have to be a kiss of love. Or even a kiss between people, as the example story (please read it!) will convey. Be creative, be believable, and remember to pucker up!


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1. Both poetry and prose are allowed.

2. Submissions must involve the theme.

3. Original work only, please.

4. Spellcheck and grammar check your work. This time, grammar and spelling errors will hurt your entry's score, so check 'em!

5. No longer than 2000 words prose, or 50 lines of poetry.

6. Respect the work of others.

7. The deadline for this contest is January 30th, 2006. Late entries will not be accepted.

8. Content: Submissions should be clean enough for twelve year olds to read. So profanity, gore, and sexual content should be kept to reasonable levels.

9. Entries will be judged on the following criteria: Creativity, adherence to the theme, grammar and spelling, and overall effect.

Note: I want absolutely no pornography in this contest. Be tasteful with your kiss scenes. Sexual content of any sort should be STRICTLY avoided for this particular contest, because of the slightly risky theme. Thanks!


For an example of a kiss scene, see 79.Example of a Kiss.



Prizes


As usual, the winner will have the option of receiving a free critique/edit on any piece of hir own writing, by [Mister Saint], so long as that piece is not incredibly long. (No more than 10,000 words, please. The winner should speak to [Mister Saint] about the content of the piece, as some topics may meet with personal bias, upon being declared winner.) A winner's button will be supplied, as will a runner-up.


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Submissions!


Please give your username, a link to your story, and a word count if at all possible. For poems, a line count is preferable.

Submissions:
1. [SleepingDragon]: 268.The Last Kiss -138 words
2. [chuchutrain]: 63.Contest Entries.Kiss Scene - 527 words
3. [Askoga]: 89.The Kiss - 1287 words
4. [Burning Inside]: 233.Short Stories.The Kiss 614 words
5. [Emily]: 252.Miscellaneous Material.Lips and Iron Nails 1,060 words -- It's edited as of January 28th, 2006. I was missing an 'into' that escaped from my nose...
6. [Kuzco]: 212.In love with an alien - 1940 words...kinda of hurried.

If you intend to enter, please place your name in this list. Thanks!
[chuchutrain]
[SleepingDragon]
[Askoga]
[Burning Inside]
[Emily]
[Today for you, tomorrow for me]
[Kuzco]

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Kiss Scene, a Flipside contest, hosted by [Mister Saint]. Writer/Poet buttons by [Ash], courtesy of WritersCo Graphics. [Mister Saint]'s hairpiece provided by Skin and Tonic, Bourbon County, West Dakota. All rights left.

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2006-01-07 [chuchutrain]: hey...um...I think something is wrong with the Example...it might just be me but it doesn't have anything in the page...

2006-01-07 [Mister Saint]: *grins* Ah... that's because I haven't written it yet. *sheepish look* I'll try to do it tomorrow, when it isn't sometime in the AM. ^^

2006-01-07 [SleepingDragon]: Yea, noticed that too. Hope I wasn't jumping the gun on this one but I was inspired so I just went for it. :D

2006-01-07 [Askoga]: I'm gonna try and join this one, my friend. We'll see if I can get my creative juices flowing again...

2006-01-07 [Burning Inside]: ok im in

2006-01-07 [Mister Saint]: Kickass. The contest is ready for entrants; I was just going to write up some off the wall kiss scene like I did with my chase scene example, to let people know that thinking outside of the box was okay. ^^

2006-01-07 [chuchutrain]: lol alright...for a moment there I thought I was going crazy ^^;;

2006-01-07 [chuchutrain]: and there is my entry

2006-01-07 [Mister Saint]: Tres bien.

2006-01-08 [Mister Saint]: hee hee... I've gotten the example scene written. I think you'll all approve.

2006-01-08 [chuchutrain]: awsome! I'll read it when I get home (at a friends house ^^;;)

2006-01-08 [Burning Inside]: yea I will read it soon

2006-01-08 [chuchutrain]: I just read it and it was awsome ^_^ I loved it

2006-01-08 [Mister Saint]: *grins* The entries so far are good o.o It's gonna be tough to judge. By the way... question for you all. When I judge the contest, do you want me to provide a report and explanation on my scores for each story, or just tell ya the winner?

2006-01-08 [Askoga]: Personally, I'd like the explanation for the scores, but if that's too much trouble, then just the winner is fine by me

2006-01-08 [Mister Saint]: *toddles to read*

2006-01-08 [Burning Inside]: yay I just added mine hope you enjoy it, I actually liked writing this out ^^

2006-01-08 [Mister Saint]: Spiffy. Classic and descriptive... yup!

2006-01-08 [Burning Inside]: wait were u talking about mine, because Askoga's is in there too and I haven't read that

2006-01-08 [Mister Saint]: yours.

2006-01-08 [Burning Inside]: oh wow well thank you, honestly I didn't take enough time on it, it should have been better but what is done is done

2006-01-08 [chuchutrain]: lol well I will go read it cause by what I hear here it sound good :)

2006-01-09 [chuchutrain]: one word: PRO!!!!!!!!

2006-01-09 [Burning Inside]: lol thank you, I enjoyed that....its alot different then normal for me

2006-01-10 [chuchutrain]: yeah I know but still...PRO!

2006-01-10 [Burning Inside]: lol well thank u, its good to see that you enjoy my work

2006-01-10 [chuchutrain]: hell yes :D I enjoy all of them

2006-01-11 [Burning Inside]: well thank you chu

2006-01-11 [chuchutrain]: I don't remember posting that but...sure :D

2006-01-11 [Burning Inside]: lol it was a while ago

2006-01-11 [chuchutrain]: lol alrighty then

2006-01-12 [Mister Saint]: A deadline has been set for this contest. as well. ^^

2006-01-12 [Burning Inside]: yay, w00t now I can't wait

2006-01-13 [chuchutrain]: I can't wait either

2006-01-19 [Burning Inside]: hmm waiting takes a while

2006-01-19 [Mister Saint]: Unless you don't have to wait long.

2006-01-19 [chuchutrain]: then it's very quick :)

2006-01-19 [Burning Inside]: that it is, oh btw for anyone who cares to know, I have updated my story still the same thing, just different use of words in parts, lose of words in another, all that good stuff that should make it run smoother

2006-01-19 [Mister Saint]: Good job, Burning. We likes the editing process. ^^

2006-01-19 [Burning Inside]: lol well I just realised I still had mistakes so another update was just done, not much change in this one, just spelling and a bit of grammar

2006-01-19 [Mister Saint]: *headbangs on Burning's behalf*

2006-01-19 [Burning Inside]: headbangs? ouch you could have just said good job or something not put me in pain, u see now I will have a tumour, and I'll never be able to write again....wait maybe that was your plan all along *shifty eyes*

2006-01-19 [Mister Saint]: Maybe. But headbanging is not meant to hurt! It's different from a headbutt, you see. ^^

2006-01-19 [Burning Inside]: lol oh ok nm I read it wrong ^^ my bad

2006-01-19 [Mister Saint]: *laughs* Thash okay. Headbang with me! *headbangs*

2006-01-19 [Burning Inside]: *headbangs* w00t its a party now man *punk hand*

2006-01-19 [Mister Saint]: *laughs* Punk, eh? *moves to the suburbs and puts on some walmart clothes* I'm ready!

2006-01-19 [Burning Inside]: lmao, meh w.e im like a semi punk guy....at least thats what I say, i dont really know what other people classify me as

2006-01-19 [Mister Saint]: Yeah, but do you care? *grins* I classify myself as a Moorn, personally. ^^

2006-01-19 [Burning Inside]: lol no I really don't care what people say about me whether it is good or bad, just as long as there not to pathetic enough to say it to me

2006-01-19 [Mister Saint]: Burning, you sir, are a mountebank.

2006-01-19 [Burning Inside]: ahhh whats with everyone and the big words on my birthday what is it lets all confuse steve day?!?!?!?

2006-01-19 [chuchutrain]: *mutters prep then cower in fear of burning coming after me*

2006-01-19 [Burning Inside]: :O oh now that was evil, evil like a chinese kung fu chicken, breeded with a laser eyed weasel. Not that I am doing this or anything *rolls eyes*

2006-01-19 [chuchutrain]: *smacks you* don't roll your eyes...it makes you seem like you're up to somthing, GOSH!

2006-01-19 [Burning Inside]: im not up to something *rolls eyes again*

2006-01-19 [chuchutrain]: fine...don't take my advice. See if I care! You'll be the one in jail for breeding evil chinese kung fu chicken with a laser eyed weasel!

2006-01-19 [Burning Inside]: not if they dont catch me ^^

2006-01-19 [chuchutrain]: sure they won't... *rolls eyes*

2006-01-19 [Emily]: Pirate Ninjas can always catch you...

2006-01-19 [Mister Saint]: She's got a point.

2006-01-19 [Burning Inside]: hmm pirate...ninjas...well ninja's would own my kung fu chicken, laser eyed weasels, or KFCLEW and the pirate side of them would be all sweet and go "YARRGH" when they beat me

2006-01-20 [chuchutrain]: yup and I'll stand there watching and laughing

2006-01-20 [Burning Inside]: lol nice

2006-01-20 [chuchutrain]: yeah...I know I am

2006-01-26 [Mister Saint]: well, now that the chase scene is done, I can start getting ready to judge this one. The chase was tough, but this one's going to be really cutthroat.

2006-01-26 [Askoga]: -Secretly prepares her salmon for the fight-

2006-01-26 [Mister Saint]: *sniffs the air* I thought a smelled a fish/asswhoopin' device. Hm.

2006-01-26 [Burning Inside]: *pulls out twenty dollar bill* hey there is something in it if you give me a good review *buys a donut* so why don't u give me a good review *eats donut* lol im j/k i dont care....but that was a good donut ^^

2006-01-27 [chuchutrain]: and you didn't save me any TT.TT

2006-01-27 [Mister Saint]: *hands out waffles*

2006-01-27 [chuchutrain]: man...how many waffles do you have?!

2006-01-27 [Mister Saint]: Forty two million, two hundred and twenty-eight thousand, six hundred and fifty-one.

2006-01-27 [chuchutrain]: *steals one and eats it*

2006-01-27 [Askoga]: -munches on a waffle, while sitting on her secret weapon-

2006-01-27 [Mister Saint]: o.O what might that be?

2006-01-27 [chuchutrain]: O.O I don't like the sound of this...

2006-01-27 [SleepingDragon]: She's sitting on Moorn? ;)

2006-01-27 [chuchutrain]: that's not a good thing...Moorn has shrimp, weasels, and who knows whatelse! Run for your liiiives!!!

2006-01-27 [Mister Saint]: I don't know. I make a pretty comfy couch. *holds up weasels* Boys, you have the night off.

2006-01-27 [chuchutrain]: *sighs in relief* whoo...that's always a good thing

2006-01-28 [Askoga]: Hee hee, He does make a comfy couch. But I can't tell y'all what my secret weapon, 'cause then it wouldn't be a secret, would it?

2006-01-28 [chuchutrain]: well it could always be a secret between us....eh...eh...eeeehhh? *nudges you*

2006-01-28 [Kaimee]: [Emily].... get that story published o.o Damn.

2006-01-28 [Emily]: Ooer. Thanks [Kaimee]. I'll see what I can do -chuckle.-

2006-01-29 [chuchutrain]: ^^

2006-01-30 [Mister Saint]: Note to all entrants: this contest ends tomorrow, that's Monday the 30th. If you have any changes to make, or entries to add for those who haven't, you must do it immediately. Thanks!

2006-01-30 [Askoga]: Wow, it's that time already? -rereads my entry for mistakes-

2006-01-30 [Burning Inside]: oh wow, ill be sure to check it over right away

2006-01-30 [Mister Saint]: Another note to all entrants: There's a chance the results won't be in until the next day. Due to some personal difficulties that I'd rather not detail, I may be a bit late on it. Please expect a delay.

2006-01-30 [chuchutrain]: don't worry about it Moorn!

2006-01-30 [Mister Saint]: Thanks Chuey. ^^

2006-01-30 [chuchutrain]: don't mention it!

2006-01-30 [Burning Inside]: yea take ur time ill be back at some point in time to check he winners anyways

2006-01-30 [chuchutrain]: what computer are you using?

2006-01-30 [Kuzco]: Hey, it is now 30th of january, 9.30 pm. I'm gonna enter this before midnight. I hope that's alright Moorn.

2006-01-30 [Mister Saint]: Yeah, Kuzco, that's cool. Your time is many hours ahead of mine, anyway, and I'm going by mine.

2006-01-30 [chuchutrain]: a whole like....almost 6 hours ahead of me...wow ^^

2006-01-31 [Mister Saint]: Alright. I've gotten the judgment finished, but I'm going to hold off till midnight (my time) just in case. Ish lookin' good, everyone!

2006-01-31 [Askoga]: -gnaws on the unseen judgement page impatiently-

2006-01-31 [Mister Saint]: *gives her a chew toy for people*

2006-01-31 [Mister Saint]: Everyone, Kiss Scene Judging is complete, and can be found at the top of the page. Thank you to all who entered... this contest saw the best overall scores I've had yet! You're all doing fantastically.

2006-01-31 [Kaimee]: You guys all did great, congrats! Emily's is still my person fav and I'm going to hassle her to get it published but thanks for providing some great reading, even for non-participants like myself ;)

2006-01-31 [Mister Saint]: They all did splendidly. ^^

2006-02-01 [Burning Inside]: hey great job everyone

2006-02-01 [chuchutrain]: dido to everyone!

2006-02-01 [SleepingDragon]: Yea, rock on!

2006-02-01 [chuchutrain]: :D

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